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Rats In A Lab: page 17 by mechanicalmasochist Rats In A Lab: page 17 by mechanicalmasochist
page 17

feel issue one should end here really

but I can only print the comic at 16 or 20 pages, no in between so I'm not sure what to do here

any suggestions?


(the issue with the box edges has already been fixed in the print version but its on my USB which i don't have handy right now sorry)
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:iconnikathewolf005:
nikathewolf005 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014
Awww I love this!
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:iconiamarg2:
IAMARG2 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Student General Artist
when is the next page coming out? did you move accounts or something?
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xWolfRipple Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Student Digital Artist
:iconmoarplz:
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:iconiamarg2:
IAMARG2 Featured By Owner May 6, 2014  Student General Artist
aww man........... theres still no pages
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:iconglogirl77:
Glogirl77 Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Where's the rest I want to keep reading
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:icondinkythedingo:
Dinkythedingo Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Student Digital Artist
MORE !
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Bluebubblecat36956 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Awwwww so cute 
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:icontycusha:
Tycusha Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm not sure if you've solved the problem but maybe add a page of thanks and some concepts of these two? That would set you at 20 pages. 
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mechanicalmasochist Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ah yes, I need to add an "about page as well, though  i'm still working on extra pages having panels with humans in makes it stressful for me since I cant draw them and need to get outside help.

i did have the character info pages though.

i think i might add  a full page spread somewhere as well since it would be nice to have one
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:icontycusha:
Tycusha Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah, personally I think your humans are perfect. But if you ever need help I'd be happy to oblige! 

I figured you did, but I wasn't sure.

Maybe like an advertisement for the next issue like they do in other comics or a manga? 
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:iconsilverfireminnowlife:
What happened to pages 15-16?
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DoomsdaySketch Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014
Your rats are simply adorable! La love 

I am really liking this comic so far! Keep up the good work!
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:iconwolfchild123:
Wolfchild123 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Stuipid humans with their bloody experimintations! They ruined everything!
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:iconiamarg2:
IAMARG2 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Student General Artist
this stuff is awsome
when the next page come out :iconmingflailplz:
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:iconj3thasabullet:
J3THasABullet Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist Artist

Wow, I really am liking this comic so far.

Nice job on the comic. I love it! XD

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:iconiamarg2:
IAMARG2 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Student General Artist
how about/ make a page 18
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ZebtehZebra Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013
wai.... this is gonna be a published book?
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blueparrakeet Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
d'aww, wheres page 17?
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Soul-Like-Jade Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013
this is 17
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:iconblueparrakeet:
blueparrakeet Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013
Oh yeah i see, meant 18 actuallybunneh icon17 ah,well..
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:iconsoul-like-jade:
Soul-Like-Jade Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013
That's okay, lol Llama Emoji-52 (Worried) [V3] 
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DieselPaws Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist
great comic keep it up!
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:iconwarriorcatshe:
warriorcatshe Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013   Traditional Artist
moar?
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:iconvarletlegion:
varletlegion Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Student General Artist
Can you please make links? Please?
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:iconhealehwolf:
Healehwolf Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oooh, and it all goes downhill from here :D
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Drawingkitty22 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
EXACLY XDD
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:iconicyfossil:
Icyfossil Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Maybe you can put some fanart in the last few pages,
Or just a preview of the next issue...
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Aristocraps Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Has page 18 been posted alredy?
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:iconxxsus-chanxx:
xXSus-ChanXx Featured By Owner May 16, 2013
is number 18 here yet?
plz tell me if it is .3.
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:iconmechanicalmasochist:
mechanicalmasochist Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
first issue ends here
once I have it published (which ill be sending off for tonight)
I'll take a week or so break before starting the next pages


(keeping issue one short because its a taster afterall)
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xXSus-ChanXx Featured By Owner May 18, 2013
ok im just rlly love reading this
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Midnightcrowwolf Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ah yes... back in those days...
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wolflover1451 Featured By Owner May 16, 2013
lol I love pannal 2
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littlelionalicious Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
cute
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6problems Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Someone else suggested it; why not have a blank page and then add in some little artworks before the next chapter? I've seen it done in some Batman comics I've read and I loved seeing them. c:
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okami129 Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
They're playing with your minds, Shale and Blank, for soon Flighty the men with gloves will make your lives a living hell and turn you two into very important plot-wise characters!
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czmAvery Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You should be like, at first everything was great and have it go through the activities they liked to do.
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mechanicalmasochist Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
well it wont go to hell straight away

I have to build up a whole seen with them discussing freedom and sunlight and then blank wants finds a way to escape just because he wants to gaze out a window to see what the outside world looks like

only after all that do the people in the lab take enough interest in blank to start neurological testing since they take his ability to escape as interesting display of intelligence

of course shale helps him do this escape so its kind of his fault too but they only catch blank...
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czmAvery Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awww ...that's sad ...
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whisperclaw77 Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
.... This started to remind me of something. ;-;
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Owl-Flight Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
at some extras, sketches or them or fan art or something. Maybe a nice inner title page.
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KarkatthewVantas Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I feel like the next pages should say
"But then everything changed when the fire nation attacked"
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:iconicyfossil:
Icyfossil Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG.
Yes.
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TanzyTanz Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
HNG the part with the water bottle happens all the time with my rats! They may push each other aside or give each other accidental licks fighting for a drop. XD

This really proves you know a lot about animal behavior!
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mechanicalmasochist Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
haha nah
I just based the stuff they re doing off my two rats

I suppose its easier when you own the animal you are writing about! ^^



heh I was worried people wouldn't understand that panel though (I guess rat owners do though!)

my boys fight over water all the time even though there is plenty they always decide they are thirsty at the same time
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TanzyTanz Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol, same here! I love it when my two girls paw at each others' faces like 'gtfo girlfriend I called dibs'
It's smart you're doing that; the things Ben and Loki seem to do are common rat things; even the time one of them got into that log cake, am I right? And when one of them took a whole piece of paper into the cage; my rats have done both of those things. Nice job with the comic; you're doing great!
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Emu94 Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Student Artist
I can't get enough of this comic ^^
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FuHia8000 Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Student
I think maybe for the last 4 pages you could maybe put a few pages or artwork/fan characters, or maybe some exclusive RiaL drawings by you. I don't really know...
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brokenthroat Featured By Owner May 15, 2013
this is a bit off topic, but oh my gosh do i want a pet rat. what are they like?
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mechanicalmasochist Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
they are the best pet

I don't know how else to put it XD

they are as smart as a dog (they can learn tricks and to come when you call their name)

but they like also behave like cats? (my rats like to play with act toys and chase feathers but they also like to sit and be stroked and can be litter trained (though mien aren't because I left training to late)

they are just adorable that's really all i can say~

though they require quite a bit more attention than a hamster or gerbil since they like being pout and exploring and playing with people.

you also have to keep them in pairs at least or they get lonely.


they get a lot of bad rep but they are actually the cleanest and friendliest of rodents too!
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