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rats in a lab: page 2 by mechanicalmasochist rats in a lab: page 2 by mechanicalmasochist
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read it like a normal comic so left to right
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the style the rest of the comic should be in hopefully unless I run out of time.

the text is an ass and I had to add colour behind because some bits overlapped into dark and light areas, indesign wouldn't let me have a lighter blue either.
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also here is the scripting for the next few pages~ (includes this page and first page)
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Rats in a lab: comic script:
Scene shows a lab like area and pans down to a crack in the wall to reveal two rats facing off in between the pipe works
Close up of the blue rat:
Shale: I won’t let you do this; you’ve gone too far this time!
Close up of the white rat its eyes narrowed and menacing:
Blank: oh contraire dear brother...I haven’t gone far enough...
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Electricity flashes through the wires on the white rats head and it spins its body round lashing out with its tail knocking the blue rat off balancing till he is hanging off the pip work by only his front paws.
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Blank: How can you defend them after what they have done to me?
Close up of the blue rat his face shows a hurt expression
Shale: I’m not defending them, but you’re going to get yourself killed...please, brothers stop this, I don’t want to lose you...
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The white rat snarls showing his teeth
Blank: you lost me the moment you took their side, if you won’t fight with me then you are my enemy and must be removed.
The white rats eyes show a flash of regret then electricity surges through the wires on his head.
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The next panel shows electricity spark simultaneously on the blue rat shocking him and causing blood to spurt from his head, his body convulses and he loses his grip falling into the dark below.
As the blue rat falls a panel shows a shot of his brother looking down on him and walking away, he closes his eyes and begins and inner monologue
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Sanluris Featured By Owner Edited Oct 13, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Aww. :( A helmet with safer wires would have been nicer for the scientists to use. It wouldn't have hurt the rat as much.
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heschu01 Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
And so now we all know what REALLY happend to Algernon
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:iconstrawberrysheebie:
StrawberrySheebie Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh my gosh yes!! That made me cry so hard ;)
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yoyotinpiney Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Just a random question how much is it for commissions do you have page on it or something? Btw..... Love this comic idk if its better then sherkin ridge though but still... :iconloveloveplz: :iconomgsocuteplz:
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:iconwolfq:
wolfq Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Student Artist
What have happen to his head!? :o (Eek) 
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:iconmechanicalmasochist:
mechanicalmasochist Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this story will tell what happened to him :3
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:icondubstepcat:
DubstepCat Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lion King in a nutshell ._.
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:icontofamutt:
tofamutt Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
gahhhhhhhhhhhhhHHHHH1!!!!!!!!!~
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:iconmidnightcrowwolf:
Midnightcrowwolf Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
-gasp- dun dun !what will happen next ?i love the suspense^^
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:icondawnehpants:
Dawnehpants Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
French omg.

awesome man. ;w;
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:iconneonfluzzycat:
Neonfluzzycat Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Student Filmographer
Shale is a guy!? Why was I under the impression he was a girl? 0.o
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:icondraghanell:
Draghanell Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
xD Dang whenever I see Blank or Shale I always think of Chronicle.(I loved that movie<3)
Great so far! I extremely love the style you're doing this in.


WE NEVER TALK ANYMORE BRO
I WANT TO TALK TO YOU BUT WHEN I DO YOU NEVER REPLY QAQ
And I saw a thing you reblogged on tumblr, and you aren't annoying if you bring up a convo first! I'm usually here dying of boredom anyway. xD
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:iconmechanicalmasochist:
mechanicalmasochist Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I knoooowwwww!!
I'm not really on deviantart as much now though
and I don' know who you are on tumblr I think?

I actually can never start a convo first unless maybe my life depends on it, I don't even do it with some of the people i'm closest too.

(heck even when I want to ask my parents something I stand around untill they ask: what, sometimes XD)


but if you have skype we could sometimes talk there, though im not on much you could just message me o tumblr when your online :3

or just tumblr if its easier :3
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Draghanell Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WELL
HERE'S MY TUMBLR LOL
[link]
I gotta make my page pretty sometime because it's boring to me, I'm still really new to tumblr. xD;;

Omg, now I'm imagining you just standing there like;
:iconmingplz: Family Pls speak 2 me kthnx

I think I added you on Skype, then we spoke a few times with Flamey and Demondbunny.
abotuflamey'sswitchdick xD;;

Alright I can do that :3c
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flamedragontamer Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
Something interesting is about to happen.
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Healehwolf Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
He's... trying to get revenge on the humans for experimenting on him? Seems legit.

I love this! Please, go on! (Haha, this seems eerily similar to the comic I started, like, last week. Well, I had the idea in my head. I didn't actually start making it until yesterday...)
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Owlfeather301 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Student General Artist
This is really cool!
But..um.. its.. au contraire I think...
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:iconmechanicalmasochist:
mechanicalmasochist Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
fixed it :3 yay
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WolfieMoonscar Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I love it so far keep up the good work Flighty :D
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:icondjeinn123:
djeinn123 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
i want serkan ridge back please
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:iconmechanicalmasochist:
mechanicalmasochist Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is for college so this comes first
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:icondragonpowa:
DragonPowa Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
i'm pretty sure she's still doing serkan ridge too.
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:iconhealehwolf:
Healehwolf Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I dunno, this seems a bit cooler thus far...
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:icontheblazingember:
TheBlazingEmber Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Be happy that she's drawing :3
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:iconreddiee:
Reddiee Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AWESOME O_O
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SonOfPerun Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
Gray rat: "Just what do you think you're doing tonight, brother?!"
White rat: "The same thing I do every night, brother; TRY TO TAKE OVER THE WORLD!"
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Pencilontheclouds Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I saw this when I was scrolling, and I have to say that interested me, I want ton know what's next^^

BTW: Au contraire, not Oh contraire^^ trust me I'm French.
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davidfenton1 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I know enough French for that statement to sound wrong to me too.. XD
French is hard. ;~;
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Windyfeather Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I look forward to more! ;w;
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Stitched-Raven Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i really love the way you drew blank in this!
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TheAwesomeHetalian Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
So I read it right to left... like in manga? Or do I have my directions wrong...? I feel stupid cuz you said "normal comic" which makes me think of Superman or something, which I believe is left to right- GAWD! STOP CONFUSING ME!!!! D:
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:iconmechanicalmasochist:
mechanicalmasochist Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
its 4 am

i wrote it the wrong way round

so yeah, its read like a normal comic not a manga , my bad...
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TheAwesomeHetalian Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
Ok, good. I'm not going insane :)
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Deerspirit123 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome! Question, does Blank's wired head spark all the time or only when he is about or actual using his abilities? .w.
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mechanicalmasochist Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
it does spark randomly most of the time but usually only in small amounts and only in large amounts when he is about to use it so for simplicity's sake I'll only show it sparking in the comic when he is about to attack :3
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Deerspirit123 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sounds cool! c:
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SIgherMink Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Professional Filmographer
shits about to get real :O
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:iconimaginestarlights:
ImagineStarlights Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Student General Artist
well I didn't want to be rude and ask why you are using Comic Sans because of reasons
your one of my idols and I don't wanna be rude
but it seems you already know of this ;w;
anyways I really do like the turnout of this so yeah, especially the effects in the electricity
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:iconmechanicalmasochist:
mechanicalmasochist Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
its not comic sans I will punch you
but in all seriousness I wouldn't dare use comic sans

it was the only other text I could find with soften edges that came installed on the pc and fitted the comic scene its called: Kristen ITC
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:iconimaginestarlights:
ImagineStarlights Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Student General Artist
oh shit
well thank you

umm
srry?
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:iconanonymous-kuro:
Anonymous-Kuro Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's too wavy to be comic sans
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FennecReaper Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No blank just stop.It's gone WAY too far.
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Rav3nRav3Rul3r Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
luv it so far! ;w;
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