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rats in a lab: page 2 by mechanicalmasochist rats in a lab: page 2 by mechanicalmasochist
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read it like a normal comic so left to right
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the style the rest of the comic should be in hopefully unless I run out of time.

the text is an ass and I had to add colour behind because some bits overlapped into dark and light areas, indesign wouldn't let me have a lighter blue either.
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also here is the scripting for the next few pages~ (includes this page and first page)
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Rats in a lab: comic script:
Scene shows a lab like area and pans down to a crack in the wall to reveal two rats facing off in between the pipe works
Close up of the blue rat:
Shale: I won’t let you do this; you’ve gone too far this time!
Close up of the white rat its eyes narrowed and menacing:
Blank: oh contraire dear brother...I haven’t gone far enough...
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Electricity flashes through the wires on the white rats head and it spins its body round lashing out with its tail knocking the blue rat off balancing till he is hanging off the pip work by only his front paws.
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Blank: How can you defend them after what they have done to me?
Close up of the blue rat his face shows a hurt expression
Shale: I’m not defending them, but you’re going to get yourself killed...please, brothers stop this, I don’t want to lose you...
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The white rat snarls showing his teeth
Blank: you lost me the moment you took their side, if you won’t fight with me then you are my enemy and must be removed.
The white rats eyes show a flash of regret then electricity surges through the wires on his head.
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The next panel shows electricity spark simultaneously on the blue rat shocking him and causing blood to spurt from his head, his body convulses and he loses his grip falling into the dark below.
As the blue rat falls a panel shows a shot of his brother looking down on him and walking away, he closes his eyes and begins and inner monologue
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heschu01 Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
And so now we all know what REALLY happend to Algernon
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yoyotinpiney Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Just a random question how much is it for commissions do you have page on it or something? Btw..... Love this comic idk if its better then sherkin ridge though but still... :iconloveloveplz: :iconomgsocuteplz:
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wolfq Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013
What have happen to his head!? :o (Eek) 
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mechanicalmasochist Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this story will tell what happened to him :3
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DubstepCat Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lion King in a nutshell ._.
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tofamutt Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
gahhhhhhhhhhhhhHHHHH1!!!!!!!!!~
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Midnightcrowwolf Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
-gasp- dun dun !what will happen next ?i love the suspense^^
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Dawnehpants Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
French omg.

awesome man. ;w;
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Neonfluzzycat Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Student Filmographer
Shale is a guy!? Why was I under the impression he was a girl? 0.o
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Draghanell Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
xD Dang whenever I see Blank or Shale I always think of Chronicle.(I loved that movie<3)
Great so far! I extremely love the style you're doing this in.


WE NEVER TALK ANYMORE BRO
I WANT TO TALK TO YOU BUT WHEN I DO YOU NEVER REPLY QAQ
And I saw a thing you reblogged on tumblr, and you aren't annoying if you bring up a convo first! I'm usually here dying of boredom anyway. xD
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