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swiftpaw by mechanicalmasochist swiftpaw by mechanicalmasochist
swiftpaw of thunderclan
all grown up


ugh I hate the pose in this but oh well

I think a good warrior name for him would be swiftstrike, swiftclaw or swiftstorm

because of brightheart's quote of him fighting like all of lion clan

-spoilers-


Also if I were to animate or portray his death it would probably involve him standing over brightpaw's body defending her and then his final blow would be caused as he bites down on the ear of one of the dogs causing it to yelp and jerk its head back throwing him off and as in mid air he manages to claw at its nose this causes the dog to turn tail and go to run but as it does swiftpaw gets kicked aside and hits a tree, breaking his back,he is broken bloody and bruised but the dogs retreat... his last act is to crawl next to brightpaw to check if she is is okay, as he see's her shallow breathing he smiles with tears in his eyes and begins to slip out of consciousness.

because even though its never shown I'd like to think in the end he won the fight even if he lost his life...
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:iconmspaintgirl:
MSpaintgirl Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh I was thinking Swiftleap
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warriorscatsicebird Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Me when Swiftpaw died: *Throws Book on the ground* TIGERSTAR I WANT TO TEAR OUT YOUR INTESTINES AND SHOVE 'EM BACK DOWN YOUR THROAGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Sunny-da-kitta Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yep thats seems exacly like me XD but dame it tigerstar DX
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MSpaintgirl Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That is actually accurate
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spottedheart207 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
you'r design for him is amazing and way you the pictured his death is so sad i love swiftpaw and i cried when he died
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Cookiecat01 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013
Very nice design! I like smile, and Swiftpaw's tail is so awesome. Good job!
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bigreddoganna Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013
I`m not sure if its ok when I laugh about what happened to swiftpaw
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:iconrazorbladejane:
RazorbladeJane Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Love the artwork
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N-o-va Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lok at that cocky smile, ugg queen of expressions
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:iconmonstercat-masochism:
monstercat-masochism Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Smexy.
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:iconautohunter2000:
Autohunter2000 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013
love the smirk
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:iconmousestar99:
Mousestar99 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's a really cool design for him! :)
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:iconbungal0w:
BUNGAL0W Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
I love your design for him :D
And the expression. Like "hey guys, i'm cool."
It's just...
LOVELY :D
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DragonPowa Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I always liked the name Swiftspirit... but Swiftstorm sounds great too.
Good job!
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omgcmd101 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013
Swiftpaw/strike/storm/claw got swag. I APPROVE.
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:iconmisakisaiaka:
MisakiSaiaka Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Cool
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:iconxxliniththewolf115xx:
thats such a sad way to picture his death

love the warrior names

i like is facial expression, to me he kinda looks like hes saying "hey there ladies"
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:iconamberstar00:
Amberstar00 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Ms Flighty i cried just a little reading ur portrait of swiftly death... Oh yeah I love the mask markings u gave him
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HetaJasmineFrost Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
I swear, I died a little when I read your version of Swiftpaw's death... ;___; Also, I think Swiftstrike or Swiftstorm are good names too...
I love this design! One of the best ones I've seen :3
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:iconthepyrophilliax:
ThePyrophilliax Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
your art sucks and you deserve to die.
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:iconroaruffer:
Roaruffer Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
*le gasp* if her art sucks then what is your art..

Ehehe you do realise you could get reported to the police for saying that..
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mechanicalmasochist Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOL if I left your name in you could have been tumblr famous
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:iconvirulentvirus:
virulentVirus Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
then explain why this has 587 favorites.
sheesh...
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:iconmiho-kitty:
miho-kitty Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
stop trolling >:I its mean
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GirLUVSWafflez Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww poor Swifty. All he wanted was to be a warrior :(
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DaSolarWolfChemist Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I imagined his death alittle like that. Only, i imagined that one dog sank its fangs into his neck and the other his stomach/back and nearly ripped him in half.... .3.
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DaSolarWolfChemist Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I think SwiftStrike fits him perfectly. Your Swiftpaw reminds me abit of how i imagined AshyFured. Honostly, after SwiftPaw died, i hated BlueStar. Its techincally her fault he died and BrightHeart is maned that way. :P
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peanut6131 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student Filmographer
I think a good name for him is swiftheart cause he was brave
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ZweiIous Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wow, I thought I was the only person who imagined his death like that xD
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azarte Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
I love his design, it's a lot more creative than most others that I've seen where he just has black stripes/splotches uwu

My headcanon is a dog would be going for Brightheart, and swiftpaw'd jump in front of her to defend her and the dog would grab him in mid-air and throw his body in the air and pin him to the ground with it's teeth, then the other two dogs would go after brightheart. They'd retreat and brightheart would fall into a fevered sleep and see Swiftpaw's spirit telling her he's alright.

I don't know either ;_;
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Blairaptor Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Awesome name suggestions. I think Swiftstrike is my favorite, or Swiftclaw.

And if you ever did portray his death like that, it would be fantastic. I'd like to think the same. :')
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Queen-of-Queens Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist
Tee-hee~ He's so cutie, yo :3
Plus, this design remainds me to all the Longtails you did (and not only you, all the people in general).
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Domisea Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student General Artist
I have nothing against this work or you, but I have no idea what it's doing on main page uvu
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:iconmechanicalmasochist:
mechanicalmasochist Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
what do you men? your main page?
this confuses me also
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Domisea Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student General Artist
I mean "Popular 8 hours" ...
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mechanicalmasochist Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
well popular is based on what people favorite or view it has nothing to do with good art sadly
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Domisea Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student General Artist
Yeah... and I know that isn't your fault uwu'.
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ArrowkneedGuard Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
His bent paw looks broken. Legs don't work like that. x_x
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mechanicalmasochist Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
***ugh I hate the pose in this but oh well ***

I'm well aware of that but this was also attempt and flexible limbs similar to the style in oh say adventure type I like the idea of over cartoonist flexability


further more I can hardly say this image had time spent on it
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Trieheart Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow... the way you described his death is just so beautiful and brave. I love the idea!
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WylderWolf Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Student General Artist
askldjjahsf your headcanon is accepted and I am crying ;_;
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:iconpokemonlover417:
pokemonlover417 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love this little warrior! ;~; It's so unfair that he died! He had so much potential!
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Windyfeather Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That is the best version of Swiftpaw's death I've ever read ;u;
I'd definitely love to see an animation. It sounds really interesting <3
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Crane-MasterOfFear Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
You should most defiantly animate his death or so! I bet it would look
great! I also enjoy this picture a lot! C:
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:iconmakaruu:
Makaruu Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Student Filmographer
now that i read that i would love to see you animate that :' )
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blueribbon9999 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ha this is amazing
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P1XlE Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
i love your design for swiftpaw so much ???? its really neat !!! and i think that is an excellent portrayal of the fight, its definitely a nice thought, having him win the battle even though he dies soon after


did you know that hearing is the last to go when you die ?? ??? i was just reminded of that fact
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liighty Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
whoa thats a full sentence. no periods... THREE MOONS ITS A PARAGRAPH IN A SENTENCE *doesn't know whether to scream or throw a party*
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BlueRavencat9621 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist
;A; Swiffffttttyyyy!!!! Y is ur tail a mace??

Seriously, its all poofy at the tip and gives me the impression that Longtail tried to teach him to use his tail as a mace. xD Try erasing THAT mental image.
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